woah... C+... Nice one.. haha





Qns: Which was the most important factor that you have considered when deciding on how to structure your information in the proposal?

Ans:
There are many important factors that actually need to
be considered when deciding on how to structure the
information in the proposal. But the most important
factor I think is in deciding on how to structure your
proposal is targeted audience.

Target audience is the most important as we need to
understand who are our target audience so that we will
be able to cater to the target audience. We can give our
targeted audience exactly what they need without the
need to go round the bush.

The proposal is important that we know who are our
audience so that when reader read, they can read in
ease. Our reader can grasp the idea of the proposal
easily. Therefore when deciding on how to structure my
proposal, it is definitely our targeted audience.

I wasn't really paying attention today due to some
issues that I am still trying to cope. I wanted to say
many things from my mind, but every time I wanted to
say, there is always a voice that tells me that I
shouldn't say. I am still fighting with this problem,
but seem like today is worse due to a fight that have
happened last week. You may ask my mentor, Ms Joan about
this issue. Don't wish to talk more. I am still trying
not to dwell in it too long. =)





Qns: Share a personal experience of miscommunication due to plagiarism, stereotyping, fabrication or disclosure. How did you deal with it then and how would you deal with it after today’s lesson? Would you deal with it in a different way? Why?

Ans:
Ok, I am not too sure how I am going to put into words. But I am so going to try. Ok. I will be bringing my real life story in. I am not sure how you are going to grade this, but I am just going to try.

According to the dictionary, fabrication is to lie, or to weave a story. I am not sure if is fabrication because I think that it is solely miscommunication. I am really... if I cry after writing this RJ, this is so going to be your fault... haha...

During one point of time, during my sec 3 year, I hated myself for saying the wrong things all the time. I really hated myself. The thoughts of killing myself was there because I said the wrong things. At that point of time, I really do not know how to pause, stop and think. I am really bad at that and I am definitely still learning.

During my sec 3 camp, I really regretted going for the camp. I thought that I could start to making friends whom I are my classmates. Oh, I have to tell you that I do not have any good relationship with any of my classmates. They are all new friends to me, as we split up to different classes because of the subjects that we choose. I am not that good with making friends, it usually takes me a long time before I succeed in making friends. (I do not think that I need to have the whole class to like me, just 1 or two). But at that point of time even going for the camp was a challenge to me, because... I don’t have a single friend.

I told myself I am going to try my best to make at least one friend in camp. But things turns for the worst because.... I said something wrong, which at that point of time I thought it was fine. I called one of her friend, dog. This is because I thought since the whole class is calling this person dog, I thought it is okay for me to call him dog. But.... I was wrong.

I was scolded on her blog, as a Martian... I can’t believe it. I thought everything was going to be alright but, things just headed downhill. This person managed to gang the whole class to hate me. At that point of time I really hated myself. I can’t believe, seriously can’t believe. I really do not know what to say or do. I really want to give up. I have tried pleasing my friends but nothing seem to work. None! I give up pleasing them, I revoked their every comments because I really have no idea what I should do.

I would never forget that my mom is my best counsel, she ask me to stop, an eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth. I did something unexpected.

Read on,
I guess I better end this game(provoking each other) quick. I do not want anybody to get hurt anymore.
HEY XXX, LISTEN HERE.............
It is time, for me to say....
SORRY XXX that I cause u so much of maybe misunderstanding or whatever is the thing is, and whatever problem that I have been causing you, I am truly sorry about it unless u never read my blog you will never understand.

Anyway, XXX.
I never want to scold you or what. I only say in a lot louder than my usual tone because I just want to make myself clearer that's all nothing much. So sorry if u think I am scolding your fellow friends in 3E5 class. I am truly sorry that I thought it is ok AAA, dog. I am seriously no idea that u had a big 'family' and u refered AAA as your pet dog... (my guess only). Please correct me if I am wrong.

Alright if the way I behave, the way I speak, the tone of my speaking have hurt you, I am truly sorry about it. Please forgive me for all these things that I have done. Sorry for whatever that I had written on your tag board(a place where one can write/reply to the person). Yesterday, it was I in the wrong. I was too angry and was trying to provoke you ever more. Sorry really sorry...

If u never read this, u will think i am still angry and hate u...
Bible say
:"14 For if you forgive men when they sin against you, your heavenly father will also forgive you. 15 but if you do not forgive men their sins, your father will not forgive your sins."
Matthew 6:14-15

I am just plainly follow what my God says... that's all
so therefore hope you will forgive me of everything that i had done against you.
oh can I ask one thing of you....

please do not put my family pictures(she published my family picture and said some nasty comment about it, which annoys me alot). Thanks.....
Seriously thanks alot for that.

Other than that, i just want say, what my mom praise you.
Seriously she is praising you for your good knowledge of vocabulary and description and she hope you will continue to use it in your composition and she hopes to see a book that is written about....
maybe...

"A weird Martian attacking Hillgrove"........erm that is what I added....
Using your strong sense of vocabulary and description to write it and maybe when u leave school you will have a full series of me and maybe can one of your friends to be the artist. I mean it may be in a cartoon strip... I am just giving some suggestion... u can choose not to accept and a choice to choose to accept....this little... Martian advice....

btw can u just tell me why u think i am a martian... i am just curious....
wanna know... tat's all... no offence... seriously...

"44But i tell you: Love your enemies and pray for those who persecute you 45that you may be sons of your Father in heaven.." Matthew 5:44-45
i am going to follow the bible.... that all...

God still love you..... that is something i am very sure of....
"16 For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten son that whoever believes in him ahsll never die but have eternal life.17 for God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because he had believe in the name of God's one and only Son." John 3:16-18
nothing much to say only a person who had God's love is able to turn hatred into love.....

Ok. That is the end of my part. She replied that she removed the picture of my family and she is still not telling me why she called me Martian. The whole class seem to be okay with that, and I was happy to be a loner. I was no longer the centre of attention, which is totally fine with me. But if I was to apply what I have learnt into my situation, I would have learn to pause, stop and think before making such a misunderstanding.





Qns: After going through today’s lesson, what concerns do you have about expressing your thoughts in public and how will you address these concerns?

Ans:
I think that when one has to express their thoughts in public, I need to know how other people might feels and how people might think. The media often read in between the words that we say, therefore it is more important that we learn how to speak with the media.

I won’t do any quoting or anything but I will just give my own experience that I have personally gained through AYG 2009. I am given the role to take care of the media and all their queries. It may sound absurd since I am actually a SHL student, DOAL course student, why do I need to handle media queries and not something else? That you would have to ask back the AYG 2009 committee members.

I would say that handling of the media isn’t my cup of tea. But I have to do my given role, so I tried. Using what I have learnt in your lesson, I was able to successfully do my job. Often the media would ask questions that may be very simple to very difficult. For example, they often would ask about the result and ask if they could speak to certain players and many others. We must be alert at all time so that we could reply with precision and taking down the queries in details so as to allow them to be able to get the right information to the public. I have exercise carefulness as I almost fall into a trap that one of the journalists has set.

Therefore it is important to exercise on how one express their thoughts in public and how to address these concern to the media.
The moment your words are interpreted wrongly, anything could happen. They could fault you for giving the wrong info, or they could insist that you said so during the interview or whatsoever and thus bringing trouble into your life. Even though I do not write any report or anything that is related to letter writing but I believe that when I have learn to handle media well, I believe that when penning down thoughts it would be greatly helped.


My Comment:

Hi Ruth, thanks for sharing your thoughts and interesting experience. It is good that you were able to apply what you had learnt in class to the real life and be able to see the relevance of those lessons. Coming back to this, I hope you now fully undertood the merit to pause and think first before responding, and not reacting.

As mentioned before, you have become a passive and quiet student in class over the last few lessons. This was in contrast to the earlier lessons where you were able to participate in class more actively. Just like this week again, the only instances you spoke and share your views were during meeting 2. Other than that, you spoke during your own team presentation. You seemed to be able to participate quite actively in the team, so you should be able to participate more actively in the class discussions, like what you had done in the earlier lessons. Furthermore, for this lesson, you could have spoken up more to share your experience dealing with the media for AYG.





I was playing game as LEO was down. ~~~





Qns: Do you think SMS and IM have helped or hindered the way you communicate with your classmates?

Ans:
I think SMS and IM have both helped and hindered.

Helped - in some sense that we are bale to communicate things faster to each other. We are able to understand each other's different way of messaging. We are also able to send things such as files and sharing of photo over easily.

Hindered - This is due to the fact that we uses too much of short form. By using short form, we might not be able to get the right meaning. For example, LOL means Laugh out Loud but for some people it may mean Lamer of Lamest. This will result in different response. We might not be able to practice our expressing of words. This is because using of SMS and IM, we do not need to take note of our expression and our action.

Therefore it does hinders the way I communicate with my classmates as I might use the wrong terms or words to communicate with them.





I was away in Malaysia. ~~~